Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
Corrected:
#1. Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on the team who believe everybody should practice. #2. To ensure success, they should require those doing the experiment for the project to have new lab equipment.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
Corrected:
#1. Darnel doesn't have any reason to question the instructions, but he still wants an explanation for this exam. #2. Olga and I went downstairs to buy new notebooks for our long term project in class.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
Corrected:
#1. Yes, Terri won the game, but we didn't know she had at the time. #2. The effect of the program's cancellation that bothered most of us members was the end of the project before we could finish.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
Corrected:
#1. You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected. #2. Regardless of what Grandpa says, it'll be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
Corrected:
#1. Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children from outside of our neighborhood, he mentioned to us.
#2. Because neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we did not know the definition of the word "chide."
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
Corrected:
#1. Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard, I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.
#2. The race among the three relay teams are close; none of the three teams however are giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
Corrected:
#1. Ms. Perez, the science teacher, "stated within a short time free electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did."
#2. Yesterday Mom told us that whoever borrow her new sweater has to take it to the cleaner's.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
Corrected:
#1. Our social studies teacher asked us write reports on the south with an emphasis on African Americans.
#2. Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
Corrected:
#1. My oldest sister, who's going to live in the new East Town apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
#2. At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
Corrected:
#1.Having read the novel, The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
#2. There were too many things to do; I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
Corrected:
#1. Mr. Guarino told us that the 24th Corps., which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.
#2. Having finished her foreign exchange trip, a plane ticket to the United States was requested.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
Corrected:
#1. "I reviewed the book really well; I received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.
#2. "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be alright," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
Corrected
#1. He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion because he lives too far away.
#2. It says that, regardless of the effect of the poor weather, the Shakespearean play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
Corrected:
#1. You should have followed three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last, add more oil.
#2. Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have a problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are eisting
Corrected:
#1. Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M., or if he was off at student government?
#2. There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
Corrected:
#1. Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the car speeding.
#2. After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club at the school located east of here.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
Corrected:
#1. "Nothing could be farther from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments.
#2. "She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate. Consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
Corrected:
#1. Yes, they're going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
#2. This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show Classic Cars reports.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
Corrected:
#1. Because it snowed heavily last night, it's alright if no one comes to basketball practice.
#2. They mentioned, I believe, that on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
Corrected:
#1. Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed listening in class, do your homework and learn as much as possible.
#2. "In order to interest Larry, his roll in the play has got to be made more challenging," Martina stated.
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
Corrected:
#1. Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on the team who believe everybody should practice.
#2. To ensure success, they should require those doing the experiment for the project to have new lab equipment.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
Corrected:
#1. Darnel doesn't have any reason to question the instructions, but he still wants an explanation for this exam.
#2. Olga and I went downstairs to buy new notebooks for our long term project in class.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
Corrected:
#1. Yes, Terri won the game, but we didn't know she had at the time.
#2. The effect of the program's cancellation that bothered most of us members was the end of the project before we could finish.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
Corrected:
#1. You should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
#2. Regardless of what Grandpa says, it'll be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
Corrected:
#1. Rob commented that our neighbors should welcome children from outside of our neighborhood, he mentioned to us.
#2. Because neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we did not know the definition of the word "chide."
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
Corrected:
#1. Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard, I'm sure he will see a lot of action in today's game.
#2. The race among the three relay teams are close; none of the three teams however are giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
Corrected:
#1. Ms. Perez, the science teacher, "stated within a short time free electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did."
#2. Yesterday Mom told us that whoever borrow her new sweater has to take it to the cleaner's.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
Corrected:
#1. Our social studies teacher asked us write reports on the south with an emphasis on African Americans.
#2. Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
Corrected:
#1. My oldest sister, who's going to live in the new East Town apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
#2. At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
Corrected:
#1.Having read the novel, The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
#2. There were too many things to do; I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
Corrected:
#1. Mr. Guarino told us that the 24th Corps., which was assigned to Germany after World War II, helped maintain peace in that country.
#2. Having finished her foreign exchange trip, a plane ticket to the United States was requested.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
Corrected:
#1. "I reviewed the book really well; I received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.
#2. "Although we had twenty-five inches of snow last winter, the bushes appear to be alright," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
Corrected
#1. He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high school reunion because he lives too far away.
#2. It says that, regardless of the effect of the poor weather, the Shakespearean play Romeo and Juliet will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
Corrected:
#1. You should have followed three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last, add more oil.
#2. Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have a problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are eisting
Corrected:
#1. Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M., or if he was off at student government?
#2. There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
Corrected:
#1. Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the car speeding.
#2. After the race begins, Delia, take these medals to the track club at the school located east of here.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
Corrected:
#1. "Nothing could be farther from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments.
#2. "She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, when she earned her doctorate. Consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
Corrected:
#1. Yes, they're going to welcome whoever wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
#2. This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show Classic Cars reports.
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
Corrected:
#1. Because it snowed heavily last night, it's alright if no one comes to basketball practice.
#2. They mentioned, I believe, that on January 2, 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
Corrected:
#1. Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed listening in class, do your homework and learn as much as possible.
#2. "In order to interest Larry, his roll in the play has got to be made more challenging," Martina stated.